E-Portfolio Writing Term 1

E-PORTFOLIO - Writing Term One

ACHIEVEMENT OBJECTIVES:

Structure:

L2: Organise texts, using a range of structures.

Indicators:

• Uses knowledge of word and sentence order to communicate meaning when creating text.
• Organises and sequences ideas and information with some confidence.
• Begins to use a variety of sentence structures, beginnings, and lengths.

L3: Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures

Indicators:

• Organises written ideas into paragraphs with increasing confidence.
• Uses a variety of sentence structures, beginnings, and lengths.

L4: Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.

• Organise and sequences ideas and information for a particular purpose or effect;
• Uses a variety of sentences structures, beginnings, and lengths for effect.

Go through your writing and highlight examples of the following sentences.

Simple sentences - green

Compound sentences - yellow

Complex sentences - light blue

                                            Animal Airlines!

As me and my friend sat on our seats a koala came up to us and asked us if we wanted food.So we both said no thanks we think we will just get some water then we heard a big loud BANG! we both looked down and saw a suitcase on top of a sloth.We were really confused after about 2 hours we were fast asleep and a giraffe woke us up by licking our feet. Was really disgusted so was my friend so we kept hitting, and annoying  the giraffe so then they would go away and it worked it left finally we said under our breath. The thing we could not believe was that the animals talked well both of us fell back asleep while listening to whale music.When we woke up we wanted entertainment so some meerkats came out, and started singing, and dancing we both laughed while the meerkats were still going. We asked for food and they gave us some more water and peanuts well anyway we drank some water and we wanted to laugh. we had to hold it in until we swallowed SPLASH! The water came exploding out of our mouths. "Oops" the koala came past and looked at the mess. He dropped the food he was holding and rushed to go get a cloth when he came back he couldn't reach where the mess was so I had to pick him up while he cleaned. Finally he was done we let hm go at once, we watched a movie and relaxed and fell asleep.  A few hours later we were not on the plane anymore we were in the hotel  but we were confused we were supposed  to go home on that plane I think we were dreaming well we better start packing the next day we were at the airport the lady told us we were going on the plane........ ANIMAL AIRLINES! no! we said we started to laugh as we walked to the plane a polar bear greeted us as we walked in meerkats were jumping giraffes licking feet koalas serving food sloths putting up luggage one of them tumbled down we both said here we go again.